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>Now the hardest and goriest part is coming So it may also take a bit longer. You are not too late about blood, but that was quite obvious for me too, so I've done it anyway.

Sounds great!

>If anyone has any ideas for some better text (or notices some mistakes) on already posted pictures that would be good too. Because I would like everything to be right in the final form.

I think the text narration is pretty much spot on -- nice simple description with a bit of humour. I'm sure you can fix the odd typo (like 'sotry' lol). But if I think of anything I'll get back to you.

>Also until it is not done you can vote for the ending type:
>1 the girl dies

I vote for death. It has a poignant finality. I think the other options lessen the impact and seem a bit silly, though a comedic ending is valid too.

>also How manager should react to that :

Well I think he might get excited by the developments and use one of the halves for his own pleasure. But that doesn't preclude the 2 options that you give either.