>>14193
Yeah, in the end I changed a lot of stuff in that chapter. Some of the old gore scenes seemed a bit repetitious so I tightened those up a bit. And I felt Kasia's 'turn around' was a bit abrupt, so added more internal and external dialog to smooth that along.

Basically I ended up re-writing the whole thing. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it.

Not sure when I'll be able to get the next chapter up. Could be days or months.