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Thanks to both of you!

[quote]>>14368
I am glad you like my stories. I wasn't sure about posting them in the new gurochan, but since I did post all of my previous ones here I guessed it couldn't hurt.

As for your comment, I have to admit that it left me thinking.

It was (kind of) an oversight on my part that she didn't leave a note or anything. At first I thought that she was just running away, acting on instinct and the note wouldn't be something she would do, but... now that you mention, the idea of her leaving a voice mail in her mothers phone the morning, just after she wakes up, might not be a bad addition...

Her mother was a very absent person in her life after the move, so an ending in which she appears at James's house to eat would be out of place, but the call maybe not. I will think about it![/quote]
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