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The shower was too loud for Cameron to hear him break in. The steamy bathroom provided an atmospheric ambience as he sneaked inside, grabbed her hair and swiftly smashed her forehead against the wall with a thump. She only managed a gasp before her legs gave out and she fell, cracking her temple on the tap on her way down. She caught a glimpse of the blood mixing with the running water, and then darkness. Darkness while he raped her, darkness while he choked her motionless body, darkness still when she was found a week later, still taking that shower.
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