>>14410
I think it was a bit too complex for one ride and actually lacking detail because awfully lots of stuff happens but everything is mentioned only very briefly with not even enough time to imagine it. Rather than focusing on one carousel exploring few different rides and more focus on individual events would have been better, like how exactly the boy fell down.


Another problem is the lack of substance, as you don't explain what is the purpose of all that stuff. Why people do all that?
I would expect that it should be some kind of adrenaline rush, excitement and thrill in the amusement park. So more should be said about that before even going on the ride. For example, what is the purpose of handlebars with razors?(and also other similar tuff) Is it to cause pain for masochists, or make holding harder so that you would fall faster?
I still did not get it if those people are masochists who like being hurt or if they do it for other reasons and what do they feel on this ride. Vikki said it was awesome but what exactly she felt?