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2021/05/29
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The first point is valid, while as I said I enjoyed the story, more focus on individual things happening, whether within a single ride or across multiple, might be better then just a lot things happening in quick succession.
As for the second point though, come on, it's called amusement park, it's in the name, they do it for amusement.
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