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After the first half of the first story I wanted to quit but then I went on amazed of how much crap can be dumped into one piece of text! I mean nothing wrong with killing lolis but nothing in these stories makes sense.Why did the lolis want to die, why did they had that amusement park, was it to cull the population? Ok and maybe they have a death fetish! And I can swallow this too BUT they don't even get excited by their death or horny with anticipation....!!!! They just want to die with no explanation!!!! You could have made a story about burning sex doll and it would end up just the same! Can't belive I've wasted precios minutes reading this CRAP!
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