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>because other people do.
Oh come on! Those other people are just you alone LOL I did not see anyone else who could understand that. :) You don't seem to be getting any comments from anyone. The only thing everyone enjoy in your work is graphics descriptions of events.
Either way your characters die not for fun but for expectations of fun. the only problem is that their logic is so horribly absurd that there can't be any other thoughts about them than "they are idiots of unseen proportions" And looks like you even said it yourself by introducing Miku in to the scene to voice that.

This actually happens in reality very often too, and it is known as masochistic personality when people sabotage themselves in the same way as your characters, but at least they do not openly voice their motivation and do not do things that are so horribly unreasonable.


If they were doing it for sake of someone else then at least their logic would be reasonable. Like in my story girl kills herself to play a prank on the boy. Of course she cant see results but she can at least imagine them

>That kind of joke.
The essence of that joke is not in the loop of reasoning but that something is right and wrong at the same time.
Formal logic in that joke is completely right, but fundamentally it is wrong.
In contrast to that you are doing exactly 2+2=5 "joke" there is no intrigue no ambiguity, it is all super straightforward

If you ae least could hide it somehow when characters are expecting to have fun but what they do leads to something different even if intention was correct so that only in the end it is found out that it went wrong