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> and it does not work like that and you even said it wrong, because YOUR logic was killing themselves to *have* fun after they die which is absolute nonsense
You're missing the part where they acknowledge that it is nonsense and derive fun from that very fact.

> your characters are ... masochists who deliberately hurt themselves ... because ... they enjoy that suffering
And what's wrong with that?
Although I'd rather say that it's not the suffering itself that they enjoy so much, but the way they are able to purposely do things that go against their own earnest desires, the agency it expresses.

> Just because someone said they are best means nothing.
Then why would it mean anything if someone (you) said they're worse? Your opinion is no more "objective" than theirs.

> you don't don't anything to manipulate reader into feelling what they should feel
Yet somehow they do end up feeling that. Such mystery.

> Maybe this was your intention but if so you absolutely fail to express that
Rather it's clearly your intention to fail to grasp that

> Like I said before art is pretty much trolling
That's just your petty excuse to being a troll

> make people feel what you want them to feel not what they want
It's the other way around: when they want to feel a certain way they consume art that makes them feel that way. When a person wants to laugh they watch a comedy, when they want to cry they watch a drama. When they want a guro story about characters happily killing themselves for nonsensical reasons reveling in the fact that it makes no sense, they go read my stories, and when they want a guro story about girls happily becoming meat because they want the eaters to enjoy their taste they go read Edward's stories.
What my stories fail in is to make people feel the way YOU want my stories to make them feel. But have it occurred to you that maybe the way I want them to feel is different from the way you want them to feel?
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