>>14773
You are always welcome to tell what is wrong with my work and I promise that I will try to improve it.
But please tell that on appropriate thread and not here.


>>14774
I do not claim to be super good writer or making any attempts to compete with anyone.
and more importantly I have no clue what is that Akito Souma and why I should write anything about that.
Unless maybe your idea is that I will write random story about random character and call that character Akito Souma.