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Crossing the stage Yumi took her place kneeling at the end of the row of traditionally dressed maidens. At 15 she was the oldest because in the past a girl would become a wife at 16. That was no longer the case but today they were recreating this ceremony for tourists rather than for a lord coming to judge what the village had to offer his men.

On cue the twelve girls opened their robes to reveal their bare chests sorted enticingly by size. Even covered Yumi's large breasts normally drew unwelcome attention and now several men were eagerly taking pictures of her shameful nudity. Embarrassed by their lecherous stares she still arched her back as best she could to avoid ruining the ceremony by being out of place.

Holding still as the cameras flashed she barely saw a glint before the blade had separated both of her breasts from her body. Its sharpness was the pride of her village's craftsmen and it sliced her womanly flesh right down to the root without leaving any rips or tatters. Traveling down the line the swordsman repeated this feat more impressively with each smaller pair of breasts until reaching 8 year old Mikki whose chest was entirely flat.

Left deliberately with no target he completed his demonstration by performing a cut so perfect that the child's smiling face remained in place even after the blade had passed through her neck, her legs secured to keep her upright even in death. In the past the lord would now decide if the village's swords had passed muster. Today delighted tourists would buy one of the eleven pairs of soon to be vacuum sealed breasts as souvenirs while the richest would pay for a private room to enjoy Mikki's body while it was still warm.

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