I waited too long to read the new thread: the story of the cave gains a lot with the new chapter (maybe it was me who had asked for Julie's point of view? I don't remember). I like how Andy doesn't care about Julie's feelings anymore, he doesn't care to hide his gaze. She's dying, is it really important? I like how she is making plans to escape, step by step while not even being able to hold her guts inside.
Betrayed and abandoned, reduced to a pinpoint by an absurd joke of fate.

The second story is also new for me, I love how Julie is almost affected by the "protagonist syndrome". Nothing stops the killer while she gets up, thid is not a movie. She can only sit and die slowly