Oh,so nice to see that you are so incredibly productive ;)
This story looks a bit on the sad side if girls get cooked because there is no place for them. I think it woud be better if they just don't want to go to the city. although that also possible under current narrative, you just did not mention it ;)

Looks like this story is going to have some more stuff packed in. I will be waiting for the next part. one suggestion/request woud be to add more fetishes to your stories since they are so playful anuway and pretty much anything goes. It does not matter what exactly. :)