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You are pumping out stories faster than I can read them LOL
In my opinion lately your stories get way too many characters making them a bit hard to follow and in the end I was almost completely lost between them. So it woud be better to focus on fewer characters at the time.

As for suggestions for story ideas I think it woud be interesting to see a bit different than usual plot where girl wants to be cooked but she is not allowed to for some reason like for example for being too young or because her parents expect her to become a lawyer :)
there could be some audition where girls have to prove that they can endure pain as well.

Also maybe it is a time to explain how things work in your world like how much pain girls feels while being processed and what they feel at all.
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