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Pretty different from what we got used to see here but still good I like how those students behave.
I would call that "bureaucracy fetish" LOL since you describe rules in so much detail.
Also nice how Mrs. King is not properly doing her job :) I love when people break rules ;)

But considering the end I expected that she will ask remaining students to therminate themselves or take the work. home Lucas could make nice toy birthday present for her daughter :) as a nice contrast to that pedantic bureaucracy. Locking them was unnecessary considering that they are not going to escape anyway. this sort of goes against the spirit of the story since termination is unavoidable anyway and nobody is trying to escape.


If you are going to continue this topic maybe other students could be some serious delinquents who do not behave so well as those :)
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