>>16238
Thank you.

I agree that I might have gone a bit too subtle. Fred does say at one point that Winter "would go to the grinder."

This work is part of a series of stories I'm writing in this world. The sexual detail will always be light, as what gets my juices flowing tends to be themes of betrayal and frustratingly ridiculous catch-22s and unfair situations that authority figures place their wards in. But I certainly don't want the sexual detail to be so light that it doesn't do anything for anyone.

Will be posting more from this world soon. Keep the criticism coming!