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2022/08/09
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21:56:41
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Yes indeed "sexual detail" was so light that it required to be read few times to even understand what is going on and it is still unclear what it was about. LOL
So I don't find this story that interesting. I want more details.
Speaking about that "betrayal and sexual violence" actually it is hard to tell if that even happens here as well because I rather see this story as "free use" world where it is totally normal to dispose children like that and they probably expect it to happen as something normal. Like in Edward hyde stories or stories of other writers here.
Not sure if that was your intent in the first place or you wanted to show something cruel.
Also disposing a girl just like that is sort of a waste which does not leave anything for imagination at least make some snuff porn or more destruction :) Oh well, at least it was recorded.
And finally some thoughts about the world itself where CP is legal and children can be snuffed I wonder how are you supposed to make money on that. Considering how big competition you will have and probably clients can even get their own toy rather than buying a movie :) (if anyone will be buying those movies at all instead of just downloading them LOL)
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