>>16243

Thanks for the feedback!

Edward Hyde is a big inspiration for my writing.

Definitely has a free use theme to it, but this is a transitional time from what we understand as normal and the free use future. CP and disposal were only recently legalized, within Winter's recent memory, meaning the change in how kids are treated is certainly perceived, by the kids, as sudden and a betrayal.

Unlike Hyde's excellent world, here kids aren't exactly stoked about being killed. Since this text is in the form of a newspaper report, the lack of any reference to how she felt about it is meant to convey how little people actually care about what the kids think.

Or, at least, that's what I'm going for! The fact that I have to explain it means I still have some work to do in conveying the message if subtlety is what I'm going for!

Happy to keep getting feedback.