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I'd like to point out that Onix has complaints or asks for more explanation on most stories here, so don't take that too hard as a criticism. I do agree with Onix and YJ on the story being too light on the details, though. While the grinder was mentioned, I'd expect even a newspaper report to include a bit of info about how she was ground up, and maybe the circumstances. Was there an audience? Just her and her dad? Did he have to tie her up? etc.
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