>>16247
I think in that case there could be more emphasis on how this disposal was just legalized and how her father was like the first person who used this opportunity which also makes this event worthy of mentioning in the newspaper. So the story is no longer about this girls and her father but rather about political change and those people are just an example so no details are required.
Also to show betrayal it woud be good idea to mention how Winter enjoyed her CP star carrier with enthusiasm and had good relationship with her father as otherwise if he is just abusive asshole as we can see here. There is no betrayal, she was just abused form beginning to the end consistently and never had any value as a human.

But either wasy in the society where disposal of your children after use them for porn is legal it is still unreasonable to think that they are surprised when that happens to them in the porn story. So some mentioning about how they feel is necessary at least in some indirect way for example casually mentioning how she was trying to resist or something else happened during that disposal what is worth mentioning just to give a clue how they feel.

Just now it came to my mind that when Winter was signed up for CP maybe your idea was not that she was enthusiastic porn star enjoying her work, like I understood, but rather she was used and raped as slave and then disposed? But that is not the typical CP when girl is raped and abused :)