Onix, to be critizised is what I asked for. But what you are doing is just insulting. You claim to have discovered logical issues in my story which would not have occured to you would you have bothered to properly read it!
For example, the answer to why humanity doesn't run out of children to maintain it's population is in the VERY FIRST line of text.
I've seen your absurdly long arguments with other users over nothing. Why? Why do you have to act this way on a site where we could just all share our ideas and mindfully critize each other?
Since I don't want to start an argument filling entire pages I shall not respond to you, no matter how much you spam.
For God's sake, does it have to be this way?