>>24156

thanks for explaining. I definitely meant the type of hand blenders you can hold that you can use without any container & could be inserted inside the breasts, so the second idea. I've made stories the other way round too but not this time.

to be honest I get bored with too much explanation and then no action because you never no how long the explanation goes on, some go on way too long and then there is no action after the explanation. I could add more explanation but I think it pollutes the story to add too much. Personally I think it's just meant to be a bit of fun rather than a proper literary work.

I could add an intro scene though something like

Cindy is in bed sleeping, one of her parents says "it's for the best". Then there is a flash of light as they select 'enroll' on the cell phone app and a picture is taken. A warning text is displayed 'You have selected permanent enrollment for Cindy at bratsplatter reform school for spoilt girls'. Swipe 'Please make sure you are not at home on the following dates and times' Swipe 'Your phone will be factory reset and wiped after we have collected her….

…Cindy is grabbed from her bed after she is bound and gagged and delivered to the reform school along with the other new girls. They are delivered to a utility room in the middle of the night and wake up in their PJs and nighties tied and gagged with their own underwear.

…Now we meet TBG shes is in platform thigh boots with small tight shorts and a tight black top, black choker and a small knife on the belt round her shorts. Perhaps she has red hair & pig tails. There needs to be something a little proactive about her at least.

She would probably give a speech something like "Your mummy and daddy ain't here, no one is coming to save you, deal with it bitches, you're on your own now & if you misbehave this is what's going to happen to you' …. roll video