This was interesting story idea, but to me it was a bit hard to follow what is going on because lots of stuff was happening without any explanation why
(and it is not that I ask for such explanation but rather that when you can't predict what is going to happen in the story it makes hard to imagine what is happening so it woud be nice if you provided some short description about what will happen then proceed with detailed explanation rather than just describing something in detail then leaving everyone to think what is going on here)