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> For example, having a subsequent scene with the protagonist having her planned stillbirth would've been excessive, blurring the ending.

That was actually part of my original plan. But the exposition required to make it work was clumsy and not very sexy.

> the story overall was very hot and it properly made me cum, and that's what counts.

That is the nicest thing anyone has said to me on Gurochan. I was pretty sure I was the only one who would admit to being turned on by my writing. As strange as it sounds, your response inspires me. Thank you.