>>24713

I absolutely love this story! You hit all the right notes for casual snuff, and you weren't shy at all about describing the goriest and kinkiest details, which was amazing to see! As a writer of this stuff myself I know it can sometimes be tough to go all-out and write completely unfiltered perversity, but that's exactly the sort of stuff that is the most fun to read ;)

The cockbortion (and subsequent 'birth') was a standout for me, and I also really loved the way you described the casual kinkyness of the families 'normal' life, and Katies attitude was hot as all hell.

Fantastic stuff!