>>24736
Great idea, but it could benefit from being a little less rushed, the ending especially lacks some kind of conclusion like "and this was exactly what she needed".

>>24737
Right, I'd love to contribute, but have you seen my last post in the 3D section, the "triumph over self" which was accompanied by a paragraph of text? Somehow it took me half a night to write just this one paragraph and then I felt totally broken the whole next day due to lack of sleep. So at this rate what would happen if I were to try writing something longer…