Love these casual snuff stories! Personally, I like the focus on their actions rather than explanations of their thought process, which to me can get in the way of an otherwise exciting story. Not that it's always bad! I like Aoi's stories, too, but it's a different feel. You tend lead with the snuff slut's thoughts, and then when it comes time for them to get used, they're treated like an object, and I think that works.

Either way you go about it, I appreciate the ones you've written here! <3