>>24801
Of course I am not going to write in same way as you do. LOL
in my opinion your stuff better fits picture format
and i think there was one author on pixiv who makes prety sexy pictures that resemble your stories somewhat juts without death

To me it is also always nice to have authors opinion in the interpretation of the story to see how my interpretation was different.
But speaking about that ribbon thing the fast that she was doing some teasing is rather pleasing to me :)


and of course i know that doms like that exist, like I say women love them too. It is rather unfortunate to me that I am not into that power stuff so much
but otherwise it is pretty popular, especially between women. And I will not even dare to ask you to reconsider it LOL

that worship like a goddess thing does not float my boat as I woud like girls make more effort in teasing and provoking guys But that is just my preference.