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2023/08/03
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>>24843
Yeah in that aspect yes:)
But you are nitpicking for details
I rather think that the whole point of those stories is women being freely abused.
>>24845
I don't say that anything was wrong but pretty much by the story nature there is no enthusiasm on the victim side and it is mostly indifference
also in the fiction you are supposed to exaggerate emotions to make them very obvious. rather than trying to rely on logic which is pretty much by definition nonexistent in guro like this.
girls could be very willing to get naked even if they don't enjoy it
at at all actually they can do it precisely because they want to suffer or die.
they may do it because they want to take risk and see what will happen expecting that nobody will attack them at that moment.
There is no logic between actions motivation and emotions by default you to explain it all in the story
for readers to understand what is exact connection between those things
like if someone is getting stabbed by the knife you have to tell if they are enjoying it or suffering and if they are suffering what is their response to that
because we cannot use real life experience to judge any of that.
But also I am not really complaining as omitting all that explanation allows the reader to apply their own harative just later in the discussion like this we find out what author had in mind.
And that was same with your stories to me when I was assuming that they are something different from what you wanted them to be, which made them more enjoyable
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