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2023/08/03
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And no, it doesn't really matter to me that the girls in those pictures aren't naked. Not only is it plausible in my setting too, as Aoi correctly pointed out, also nobody ever claimed that those pictures are *illustrations to my story*. I believe the comparison was more based on vibes, and I don't like the vibes because the composition of those pictures goes out of its way to clarify that even if the girls were trying to struggle, they wouldn't have the option to do so. That implies things - and yes, not everything needs to be explicitly spelled out to be part of the story. Subtext does really exist, the choices of the writer or the artist of which details to include and emphasize and which not to.
(Aoi is not necessarily wrong that I have trouble emphasizing parts I want people to notice. What can I say, I'm still learning as a writer. There is still a lot that can be reasonably read into the text based on how I wrote it)
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