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Just like me you are reading is stories in another way that indented as you focus exactly on the idea that death is cheap while Aoi is focusing on the idea that entire situation is absurd and death is not cheap

Killing a girl because she forgot her homework is not necessarily that different because this makes death cheap in general and also it depends on how she reacts to that as she probably can just refuse to be executed.

I did not complain about your story logic ever, If I remember right i only mentioned that your characters behave in the way like if they were immortal. The only problem with logic in this situation for me how characters who atach no value to their life managed to survive for so long.
maybe if girl is like 5 year old then somehow fine but how are you supposed to to live up to the age of 16 with that attitude?



I am not demanding you to write like I say just saying that this "show, don't tell" is standard writing practice
I am not Always aware what you want to achieve with your story or what are your preferences so naturally what i suggest may be unacceptable.

Also you got it it wrong because I was not retelling your story, i was rather saying how if could look like if Marie was tsundere. using your story just as example.
Yes in your story is it not like that at all. and just now you told that you dislike tsundere characters which explains lots of your story preferences.

There was some misunderstanding because I assumed that you wanted it to be fully consensual If is is is semi con then everything is totally fine
But all of this happened because you sort of said that you only like consensual stuff and this is why you dislike those pictures too I pointed out that this story is not fully consensual. and I am glad to hear you just confirmed it.so I got everything right.

Also from my perspective I am always looking for contradictions in any communication to identify true intentions.
slapping someone in the face for touching can mean "don't touch me" or "try harder". only if the same message is confirmed over all communications channels only then it is unambiguously true.
This is why I see that in the story something does not match I assume that there are something behind the surface