>>24892
>Then what if a person is feeling both, like Marie in my story? What if a person is genuinely indifferent and doesn't either disagree or experience enthusiasm?
Not sure how it is even possible to feel both you, as that should be exactly what I call tsundere behavior.
Also it can be indifference and there is fetish for that too like if someone is having sex with a woman who absolutely ignores what is going on.

>"Care about death but still don't mind dying" isn't logically wrong. People do in fact work like that.
No it is logically wrong It can't be that you care about dying and don't care about your life

>YOu copied the exact quote from Aoi's text that didn't have the words you used anywhere in it. That's why I'm objecting: because you are saying a thing that is untrue somehow.

this is not what you even said above

>Aoi's characters don't revive the next day. Maybe in your personal imagination they do, but not in the text Aoi has written. Instead think of it as many branching timelines: Rin1 has died, Rin2 has died, and every time Aoi writes a new story Rin(n+1) is generated. It's like that warehouse cleanup story where Asuka and Shinji help kill Rei's clones: Rei isn't reviving after each kill, there's just a lot of her. It's exactly like my infinite girls who die at the end of every story only for a new one to come in for the next one, it's just that I write them all to have different names, personality, appearance etc, while Aoi writes them all to be the same.

This is just how he writes story commentary
the story itself is not in any way different from mine

but logically it is same as if characters are revived juts without prior knowledge what happened in the prior story

And funny enough, that Rei cleanup scene happened in "My little pony" episode too, where Twilight kills like 50 clones of Pinkie pie until only one is left


>Your format gives the readers the impression that they revive every time without stating it explicitly - the characters act as if nothing is permanent. Aoi's format implies that every death is final, as do characters' thoughts and the explicit lack of continuity - other characters' attitudes are even different between stories.

How exactly? How does my story gives you impression that they revive?
Yes my characters act as it is nothing permanent and so act Aoi's and your characters as well. None of then is bothered with death as if they know that it is not permanent.
And where exactly do you see continuity in my stories? they can be read in any order. Continuity is all in your head only.
Maybe now I should complain about your reading comprehension?


Also even under my commentary they are all clones because if someone dies they stay dead and have to be disposed somehow. while new characters appear into the scene. Maybe at some time i will even go as far as show them along each other, but then the continuity will be explicitly stated
in some way it resembles Higurashi When They Cry series where everything also starts as independent stories but they they all get connected and explained in a new ways.

more deeply speaking the universe itself is under development and its rules are changing over time.

>>24895
yeah it does suck that this board format does not allow to separate discussions and content.
But the whole idea of posting a content is to turn it into discussion of some sort