>>25297
well you named yourself AI LOL
but at this time you can expect accusations of using AI because probably everyone uses it :)

For example this kind of description is hard to follow:

>Spreading his fingers wide, he pulled out an arm long section of her intestines with the same suction sound her sister had produced and went on to inspecting it for a hidden USB key.
here it was unclear what exactly how did he pull those intestines?

Only later when being aware what happens I can guess that he somehow tore her large intestine and pulled her guts out through the hole

>He looked at the two teens whose holes were gaping and who both had a coil of intestines dangling out of their inverted asshole.

If intestines are puled out though ther ases they can't be gaping maybe you mens their pusies are gaping?

>Without any further comment, he pulled out his knife and started cutting Julia's intestines in a circular motion around inverted rectum, a few inches up from her asshole, in order to free the intestines from the rectum itself.

as when reading that first I was confused Once again what is the meaning of that circular motion as that woud be something like messing up with those intestines moving knife in circles like if mixing things in the pot for unknown reason
I suspect that you are writing in non native language.
But also since I did not understood things that were happening before it added extra confusion where those intestines came from.
Now I wonder i that cutting was even necessary if he successfully ripped them out already? Ir her ass just prolapsed from all that fisting.


So in those situations you should start with more detailed description of the scene especially in situations when it is extremely unnatural and spend more time on details of what is going on, especially because it is actually the good part of the story and there is no reason to make it short.
don't hesitate to repeat scene descriptions to get things on track how everything looks like at the moment before continuing further.

describing juts actions only works in situation when things are simple but your scenes are extremely complex.