I see you asked me to look at those your stories

It is all fine but I think you did not give that much attention the the explanation how exactly it happens or what even what exactly happens what is more important in the picture story than in text.

I don't think I will made it exactly following your stories but maybe I will do something what will somewhat combine them.
Just one thing that I am not very interested in having manly men in stories and even if it is not going to be lolis I think everyone has to be close to 18 and pretty cute.
ot it should be older woman and younger guy or a boy