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I appreciate the feedback and the idea. I don't really write stuff that doesn't get my juices flowing, and when I try it comes out really shitty. I'm a belly guy. I like smooth flat stomachs being cut open, shot full of holes, stabbed, etc. The thought of guts spilling out of a cute girl's tummy does crazy shit to me, but the thought of those same guts coming out her ass or her mouth doesn't. Like Devin and Julie said in this story I just wrote, I can't explain it. I don't know why. It's just how it is.

I say all that to say I don't think I'll be writing a scene where Julie has her guts pulled out of her asshole or pushed through her mouth. I hate to disappoint, but I gotta be honest.
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