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> I think one of the things I find missing in your stories is the casual sex that can go along with casual death.
I'm sure some of them do have it... but in general I find the usual sex scenes boring (which also makes writing them a chore), it's the circumstances around sex (how it's casual) that arouse me, not overly wordy descriptions of its physiology. And with death it's similar, I don't mind the physical descriptions of it but primarily to serve as something for the characters to have casual/eager attitude about and then those emotions are the fuel for my arousal. And so when death isn't even sexualized, it makes it feel all the more casual. But I guess that's only me...

> It's a part I hadn't really talked about, but the idea would be to make it fun, to enjoy it.

For this purpose wouldn't it be better to just frame it as entertainment in the first place instead of culling? See, this culling theme already makes people think of wars and concentration camps...

> the reason to make it 'lopsided' is to provide a "reason."

That's my point: you don't have to have a reason to write a story focused on girls other than that you're into girls. Again, think about any anime out there having a mainly female cast of characters. Are they set in worlds where there are more girls born than boys? No, and it doesn't bother them. They just go with girls because they're into girls. Boys still exist in the same numbers, the story just isn't about them.

So like maybe your story is describing an anatomy lesson where a student is chosen for dissection and it just happens to be a girl. Or today it's a girl and the lesson on dissecting boys is tomorrow (or was yesterday), but your story just doesn't go there because you're not into it.

Or if you want to go with test failure after all, it just so happens that all the worst scoring students are girls. Out of all the schools in the world it will happen by pure chance many times, and your story just happens to describe one such time.

Or if the teacher decides who gets snuffed, maybe the teacher is just into girls. And as the teacher declares the list of cute girls to be snuffed, the students just lightheartedly go "lol you're such a lolicon" and laugh. And maybe it can even go further into the teacher saying: "well it's just hotter when it's girls", and everyone, boys and girls, agree - what's true is true.

Or a girl is walking through a park, sees a suicide booth and decides - well it's such a nice day, nice weather, I'm in good mood, why not just go and kill myself. And it doesn't take skewing the world's birthrates to just have the story follow this particular girl. Not because there are mostly girls in the world, but because you want to tell a story about a girl.

Or as you mentioned yourself, a story can just happen to be set in an all-girls school.

It just feels so artificial to come up with the whole there are more girls excuse when you totally don't have to. It's perfectly normal to write stories about girls even if the world isn't all girls.

> Basically, I was wondering if people would be interested in stories based in this world.

Well, the best (and frankly, the only) way to see that is write a couple of such stories. Just describing the technicalities of the setting doesn't really tell us how well written and how hot your stories will be. It will take reading the stories themselves to see that.
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