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I really appreciate the kind words. Glad you liked it


Aoi, I wrote a whole reply to your last message and I deleted it because... well it came off as belligerent and mostly just angry. Frankly, I'm not going to argue with you on this anymore than to say your last two sentences make NO sense to me at all. The paths are talked about but none of them are actually assigned or described in the chapter. Natalie simple wants to be entertainment for her class. She knows they will enjoy it, and more importantly her teacher will.

I've already said that the world building here was rushed and didn't quite have the effect I wanted, but it worked enough to give a starting point.

Perhaps I'll write another chapter... perhaps not. We'll see. But if I do, I will be looking at students that follow those other paths as well. So, perhaps it will just be casual sex in one of the chapters...
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