>>27070
>>27071
Well, fair enough... still I wish I can realize some of my more ambitious ideas one day...

>>27072
> I don't normally like it when it's only a male getting snuffed, but with how casual...
Yeah, I'm not exactly into male snuff myself, but I'm totally into casual attitude, and having the story itself not care if it's a boy or a girl getting snuffed adds to that casualness.

Funnily enough, this story actually happened when I started writing a different story where it was the girl who was supposed to die, but as I came up with the names for the characters and had them introduce themselves to each other it got to this idea where he should snuff himself to reduce the number of Petya's in his class, and from there I decided to write this other story with those names, while for the story I originally planned to write I will try to come up with new names for the characters.

> well you utilised the descriptions that you used
Where's that? I appreciate the sentiment, but the way I look at this story the descriptions are very lacking.

> how your writing has evolved overtime
More like degraded...