>>27231
Ashlyn might not totally give up on him after just one unsatisfying time in bed, but I agree that he was very lame. If I ever get around to writing the sequel planned about that Angel Buns restaurant, that guy isn't going to be in it.


>>27243
> It's kinda weird, but also creative.

Thanks, that's pretty much exactly what I'm going for in most of my stories, so I'll take that as a compliment.

As for the idea of a "living dress", I think it's pretty hot (naked girls in bondage together always does it for me), but 100% agree that it would be wildly impractical. I do think that there could be some story potential for one more along these lines with a much younger "dress", but that would probably exhaust the premise.