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There’s an abandoned wooden outhouse next to the forest in the campsite. Rumors’ saying that it was haunted by the spirit of young girl who met a grisly fate.

But that’s not what’s on the boy’s mind right now, running as fast as he can with both hands on his shorts covered buttock he’s in dire urgency. Having one too many grilled ribs hours earlier and trying to find an available portable toilet only to be occupied. Not wanting to be caught with his pants down in open nor having an accident, he rushes toward the outhouse.

Wrangling the rotting wood door aside and rush in, he wastes no time removing his lower garments and squats over the small hole as it creaks beneath his feet, noisily evacuating his colon, filling air with putrid scent.

Now relieved, he wipes himself and pull his garments up. Opening the door his eyes catch sight of something that make him freezes in terror.

…A girl, wearing red attires standing in front of him…

Her hand reaches for him as the boy, now remembering the rumor associating with this outhouse, scream as he backs away from her. He trips and fall on the floor he was squatting on earlier.

Suddenly, the floor breaks and he falls inside a narrow pit, landing face first into his own wastes as it quickly flood his nostril and mouth.

He can only thrashes around unable to free himself, eventually he goes limp.

His body is found days later…
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