>>27453

My apologies for being unclear with what I typed here.

I just want to ask what advices I can use to improve my writing. Like...

- Describing the scene better (mostly the fetish/Guro side) without going excessive on the word counts or sounding like dragging thing on more than needed.
- How to deliver a good build up and post-climax to the 'action' so it doesn't sound like I'm slapping words just to pad the main course.
- (optional) Finding the right audience and the balancing the 'action'. Since my kind of writings are in a bit of odd spot between scat and guro.

English is not my native language and I apologized for this.