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>>27467

Thank you both for the feedback! I agree that this would have been better with some more personal & sensual details. I mostly shied away from that here because of the necessary time scale and number of characters, so I was worried that it might turn into an epic. I have other unfinished stories that ended up far longer than intended and I have trouble finding the energy to finish something that big unless I really love it.

I like the idea of focusing on one girl and putting in little vignettes from her life. That would have offered a good balance between showing detail and not blowing this up into a novel.

Oddly, I personally find vore in general to be intriguing and exotic, but only tangentially find it to be erotic. Obviously, that is having a pretty big impact on my vore stories: they tend to be a lot more dry, with limited focus on sex. There were plenty of easy opportunities for sexual experiences in this one which I overlooked, so I'll try to keep more of an eye out for them in future vore stories.