wow, that was so great.
Personaly I never thought sex was necessary for a guro story.
this one really has the perfect amount of sex, some sexual elements but no long fuck scenes. the perfect casualish atmosphere, they don't want it, but it happens without much problem, death or violence.
you instantly became one of my favorite writer!
I really hope you plan to make a sequel or another story soon!
there's so much potential!
Hermione and Umbridge need their turns too, and I really want to know who you have in mind for the next 'assitants' and spells.
also, Luna is one of my favorite girl, and beating one of my favorite way, so thank you ;)