>>28047
Good idea with the last sentence! I think I'll add it.

I'm afraid that's a basic mood present in most of my stories. It's just a stylistic choice, since I write the stories mainly for myself. But I'm very glad you liked it anyway. Regarding the confusion with "Rhona's House," the sentence works perfectly in German. I use a translator who usually does a pretty good job, but certainly not always perfect. Sorry if such misunderstandings occur from time to time. I try to eliminate them beforehand, but I don't always notice them.