Thank you for the story. It was a nice bit of world building and a lovely soft core story.

Take this next part with a grain of salt as it's only my personal opinion, but the thing that always vexed me about Edward Hyde's stories are that they seem to lack intimacy. The girls are processed, yes, but it's much more mechanical/clinical and the sum of their lives until then is nothing more than their meat quality. It just strikes me that the consumption of free range girl meat should be much more intimate as you're not only eating her meat, but everything that made her what she was up to that point and everything she might have become if she hadn't been eaten. This is something TheVisitorBlack usually does very well, in associating a girl's meat with her entire life.

This is just me, but if a girl is just meat, as opposed to a girl, then it's like getting aroused over a steak. Delicious, sure, but not exactly something I'm going to fap to. =P

My personal suggestion, would be to add a few lines about how the girl's lifestyle and personality affects her meat quality and taste and to more strongly tie in how sexy it is to eat and be eaten. Perhaps a lore drop to explain population stability is due to girl meat being a powerful aphrodisiac and fertility drug lol.