I'm reading it also! I quite like the mother and her nonchalant childish dream of becoming meat that she put aside to raise her daughter and how she's now helping her daughter fulfill her own dream. It's an interesting positive outtake on a story where the mother would normally be jealous or overly harsh that her child is now fulfilling the dream she once had. If she's a single mother, I would almost very much want her to join her daughter, but I'm also quite fond of the idea that in the Sidneyverse, meat is mostly from younger folks and she's resigned to be a person.

I would say though that something feels a tad sterile about this story that's preventing me from being fully immersed. This is just my small opinion and I can't quite put my finger on it. I think I just need to get to know Natalie Robinson a bit more with a slower burn on transition between girl and meat and how the later starts to appeal to her more and more before she agrees. She should be reluctant at first, since she has a life, but realize that this is more important.

I do quite like the freedom she felt after she declared herself meat. But that should probably be accompanied by a personality shift. She's made a big and final decision and there should be a rush of emotions as she embraces all the things she was too afraid to do. And I was quite looking forward to her mom taking her to a restaurant while she was nude and the shenanagins they might get up to there, especially if there are other families that see her.

Some more lore and world building is always appreciated too.

Why is it important that Natalie's uncle have her at the wedding as opposed to any other girl? Other stories have their own kids as meals so the bride and groom can start fresh with a new life. But they're not eating Peter and Laura is the bride, and Laura being the bride is pretty hot btw. Maybe something romantic about how the meal must be of someone they love and who loves them so that their marriage begins in love? A bit of ceremony and mysticism over Natalie's parts would be great too, later. About how her different parts symbolize different aspects of a happy marriage, ovaries are fertility, pussy is passion, breasts are health etc.

Well, just my rambling suggestions and opinion anyways. But I am enjoying this story and would love for it to continue.