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>>28113
Oh how I missed comments like this, thank you so much.

Many of these points are reasons why I'm rewriting the story at the moment. In my opinion, although I love the story and the characters very much it felt to rushed. So I decided to go over it once more from the beginning.

Aside from that I found a better translation method, so you can enjoy it even more. Sometimes the translation into English felt a little wooden.
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