Quite loving this story!

Some random comments

I love the throw away line where Sofie comments about her parents being open minded about her dating a 27 year old when she was 14. This is a world where girls are meat but an age gap in a relationship is still frowned upon. It's just a very interesting way of balancing out the absurdity with something a bit realistic and makes everything feel a bit more grounded. Of course, Sofie's relationship with her daughter seems to be completely natural with no taboo at all, which makes it quite fun.

When Stephanie is examining Natalie and says she has excellent meat and that she has that in writing, what did she mean by that? There was no mention of her being graded or documentation of her meat.

The transition from pussy to filet was quite enjoyable. I love it when a pussy is a pussy until it's designated as meat and then it becomes something more. If I may make a suggestion, there should maybe not be a mention of the transition so soon. Everyone should refer to Natalie's pussy as a pussy up until the inspection. Then much later Natalie should also refer to it as such and wonder when she started to think of it as a filet. I remember that bit in a fantasy book once when the old man was revealed to be the grandfather and the protagonist wondering several chapters later when he first started calling him grandfather. I actually went back to reread it and there was a clear point for that transition that was well done.

Natalie might be a bit too smart for a 12 year old. She immediately knew Stephanie was treating her like meat to get her used to the idea. This should probably have been drawn out a bit more with the mother being a bit more liberal with the potential meat girl and Natalie wondering why her mom is acting mean yet enjoying it before she realizes what's happening and the mother playfully admitting what she was doing.

Gotta say, Mom seducing her daughter about her childish fantasy of getting slaughtered was quite hot. Doubly so for the paradox that if mom was actually slaughtered, then daughter wouldn't exist, yet the daughter thinks the image is hot. And so do I.

Has it only been one day since Natalie was asked to become meat and then made the decision for it? There should probably be a comment in there about Natalie coming to this decision so quickly.

Mom's mention of an agonizing death contradicts the earlier uncertainty of weather the Uncle will want her alive or dead. It could be an agonizing death, or it might not be. And I would venture to say that it shouldn't be agonizing at all or no girl would ever volunteer for this. It should be something they want. Instead, when mom's trying to balance things out and point out reasons not to roast, she could talk about how Natalie will never get to play with her boobs again or see how large they might have grown. She'd never lick her mother's pussy again. Or swim or dance. Things she's already established to enjoy.

Linked to the last though, the pain slut bit came out of left field. Nothing in the story so far suggests Natalie likes pain. Even imagining herself spitted, she has no comparison as she's never been hurt so far. I think this aspect should be removed or expanded on. Preferably removed, but that's just my opinion.

Laura's description of why she wants Natalie as a meal seems to have a bit more prose than I would normally associate with a 17 year old.

Oh, another potential downside to becoming meat Mom might have used is that Natalie can no longer have sex with Peter as it might spoil her filet. Thrusting is a bit more rough compared to licking after all. And no one wants semen in their food. Or, at least, I do not.

Oh, I love the lore about the cut off date! Excellently done and provides a fun context on why underage girls meat is so much more plentiful.

Stephanie really is too smart for a 12 year old if she immediately understands with Carte Blanche means lol. She should probably be a bit more confused about things.

One last thing. Stephanie seems to really love her only daughter in more ways than one. Becoming meat is more than just a change for Natalie it's a change for Stephanie as well. The story is mostly from Natalie's POV but there here should be something in here a bit about how this affects Stephanie as well. Stephanie is losing her only daughter and a great lover. How does a few bites of delicious meat justify that for her? She doesn't even seem to even be allocated any of the good parts as those seem to be going to the bride and groom and the crush. This is normal in this world though and you probably don't want to make this more of an epic. But just a few sentences where Stephanie tells her daughter that she'd be proud of her but also that she'd miss her would probably work.

Anyways, thanks for the great story! Really looking forward to the naked Natalie walking through town and being gawked at. Or not, as naked meat girls are probably common place. But Natalie is still new to the whole being one thing.