This story is shaping up quite nicely, good work Pixel. I only come here to see if there's something new every now and then, and discovering a new, gifted writer is always a treat. To be honest, regarding the conflict between Natalie and Stephanie, about the love and lust they feel for each other, the reluctance of Stephanie to lose her daughter/lover, and the doubts of Natalie about going to the end with her decision, I only see one way of resolving it neatly: For the mother to be the one to cook her daughter, beginning to end.

Up to you, but fantastic work nonetheless.