>>28226

Opps, what I meant to say was that you've done well in giving Natalie a history and personality that I'm invested in her as a person and I want her to survive and thrive. Which is in extreme contradiction to her desire to become meat.

This is a point that I never could reach with Edward Hyde's stories, wonderful as they are. But I could never become invested in his characters, as they were all basically insane, so their deaths had no emotional impact on me. His girls were nothing more than meat to me, whereas your girl is a person. Anyways, just my opinion on things.